The Golden Bow
This story tells of the mighty Parashurama and why his bow was broken by Rama.
Rakshasa Busters
This story tells of Rama and his brother Lakshmana fighting evil Rakshasas with the help of Parashurama when things get tough.
The Awakening of the Dead
This story tells of a strange little town in Connecticut, where once a year the dead come back to life and visit current inhabitants of the town.
The Loving Goose
This story tells of a loving husband who wished for too much for his family, and a wife that was too greedy in taking the gifts that he bestowed upon her.
The Loving King
This story tells of the brave king who has so much love for his people, he is willing to do just about anything for them, even if it means giving up his own life.
Tucker, I really enjoyed seeing the stories that you included in your portfolio! I think that your portfolio has a lot of potential and with a few minor adjustments, can be one of the best in the class! First of all, I would say to include more pictures or background images. These can be really useful in adding minor details to your stories and they can make it more interesting for the reader. After all, a picture is worth a thousand words! Second of all, I would say give us something a little more in the introduction. We all know that you have a portfolio of a collection of different stories, but it would be cool to have some small paragraph introducing the reader into what you are about to share through your collection of stories. These are just my thoughts and if you do not want to make these changes, you do not have to! I just wanted to offer up what I saw for potential in your blog! Overall, great job!
ReplyDeleteHi Tucker,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading all of the stories you included in your portfolio. Including more pictures would definitely add to the portfolio and decorate the page or even make the story more interesting. I also think that the introduction needs to be a little bit more detailed. Maybe a short summary of what you will be sharing throughout your portfolio or something along those lines. Overall I think you did a great job!